M.V.P is here

[Dan Hellman]

*M.V.P enters the FCW head quarters building*

M.V.P-Ok I am here now where is the stupid Information Guy.

(M.V.P sees a guy standing I the front desk)

M.V.P-Hey you!!

The Guy-Sir can I help you.

M.V.P-Yes you can,see I am the M.V.P of FCW, Montel Vontavious Porter now I will be taking my locker key and heading to Friday's show ok.

The Guy-Well Hello their.

M.V.P-Hello your sorry butt now give me those stupid keys and I will leave.

The Guy-But first yo*Interrupted by M.V.P*

M.V.P-I don't care what I have to do first give those damn keys.

The Guy-OK calm down.

M.V.P-Ya you better give it to me before I kick your ass.

*The Guy gives M.V.P the keys to his locker room and M.V.P grabs it*

M.V.P-Do you know why I got this job?

The Guy-No I don't.

M.V.P-Because I am better than you.

*M.V.P leaves laughing*

[Jason Evans]

Pretty good for ur first promo. Gramar change, though: "Do You KNOW Why..."
Lol still, it was pretty damn good for ur first promo. BUT, it could use a couple of touch ups.

[Dan Hellman]

lobster!!! I forgot Know sorry

[hardy222]

Good RP but you should add different colors for your actions and speeches.

I thought you knew better than that.lol

[firestarter]

May 19, 2009 19:21:32 GMT -5 Jason Evans said:

Pretty good for ur first promo. Gramar change, though: "Do You KNOW Why..."
Lol still, it was pretty damn good for ur first promo. BUT, it could use a couple of touch ups.

Just saying, but when you correct someone's grammar, which is great, you should probably spell grammar right.

[Blade LaVigne]

Good promo MVP for it being your first. Work on grammer a bit, add color and remember to have fun and you should be good.